Huge map, odd layout. Last thew rooms, complicated and hard. Enemy are to well spaced apart, so no real problems killing them without loss of any health,good fun map,worth a blast.

Poor texturing, and the level design is quite wacky... but I can't say I didn't enjoy it. It was fun at a bunch of points, feels like a Doom map. For the author- I'd say play some of the more contemporary maps (Arcane Dimensions, SMEJ) and try and base your scale off of those maps. A lot of places are too big or too small, but very interesting at their core.

Thanks for reviewing, any criticism is welcome so I can improve.

After the spaceship thing dumps you in a featureless room, how are you supposed to get out?

... or is it supposed to carry you down through the floor into the area below where the ship itself finishes up?

Impatient, I just noclipped down to the spaceship base and continued from there to the end.,

Can I say this is a good map? I cannot. But can I say i didn't enjoy it? No, I can't say that, either. It was 274 kills of uncomplicated fun (or 268 in my case, I evidently missed half a dozen monsters), and that counts for something. But sometimes less really is more, and The Journey could really have done with being half the length and twice the quality.

I see this is Paul Keefner's first published map, and that he already has two more in the database. I'll be interested to see how he progresses.

big ass map